Wednesday, 2 May 2012

Unit 4 Story telling story 2

Unit 4 Story Telling Story 2

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  1. Hey Amrit,

    Really like the opening - with the lightbeam starting the dream sequence. I can imagine him just up in the top of it, watching the light move around, and then we hear the slow building up of the circus music and suddenly we see him doing his act in the dream sequence. Not sure about the ending with the trampoline falling out of the ship. How about the ship wreck breaks the dream sequence as you've originally written it, and then, as the lighthouse keeper rescues the people off the boat, he does so in a suitably acrobatic way, and ends up with everyone applauding him anyway?

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